by Karen McCullough
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Few people other than writers really think about this. Like a house is built with wood and bricks, novels are built with words. They’re formed into sentences, then paragraphs, and chapters. But the fundamental building block is the word.
And, like the bricks in a house, you don’t want readers to notice the individual words themselves because, if they do, they’re not getting the picture. They’re not being swept up in the story dream.
I recognize a lot more words than I use in either everyday speech or in my writing. Disembark, invocation, halitosis, tertiary, megalomania, conscription, emesis. I know what all of those mean, and they may appear, very rarely, in one of my books, should it happen to be the exactly right word for the situation.
Normally I try to use simpler, more common, more direct words. Those bigger words can stop a reader short if they aren’t used precisely or aren’t recognized. The last thing I want to do is stop a reader short and pull them out of the story.
There are some more common words I use entirely too often, and I have to try to eliminate as many as possible – really, very, then, kind of, etc. I have a list and I check each book for the number of times I use each one before I send it out.
Other words just don’t seem to suit me, so I don’t use them. I’ve written several romance novels, but I’m pretty sure I’ve never had a male protagonist call his potential partner, “baby.” “Babe,” yes. “Baby,” no. It’s all about the connotations.
And some words I just refuse to use because they’re derogatory, too crude, or too ugly. For some of my sweet romances or cozy mysteries, the publisher doesn’t allow four letter words. In situations where a particular character would be likely to use those words, instead of having them say something that will sound ridiculous in the circumstances, like “oh, darn,” I just have them curse under their breath. Occasionally, I have a character “utter a slur.”
I’m not opposed to using four letter words when the situation calls for it. In the first book of my Market Center Mysteries amateur sleuth series, my heroine, who is generally a nice, even-tempered sort, finds a body in a dumpster at the end of the first chapter. She doesn’t say, “oh darn it.” She says, “Oh, s**t.” And repeats it several times. Nothing else would properly convey her state of mind at the time.
As an author, I’ve learned to consider every word I use carefully. I read my stories out loud so I can hear how they sound. After forty years of writing, it’s become such an ingrained habit that I no longer have to think much about it as I write. A wrong word just rings in my head like a badly tuned string in the violin.
The Gifts and Home Decoration trade show provides Heather McNeill with the longest week of her hectic life. As assistant to the director of Washington, D.C.’s, Market and Commerce center, she’s point person for complaining exhibitors, missing shipments, and miscellaneous disasters. It’s a job she takes in stride—until murder crashes the event.
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